tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post2188353074394765115..comments2024-01-10T03:21:40.829-05:00Comments on Attack of the Muses!!: #FridayFlashMonica Marierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03112762564137354581noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-42281901393325509262010-05-01T09:04:23.936-04:002010-05-01T09:04:23.936-04:00Oh, what a great twist! I really enjoyed this and...Oh, what a great twist! I really enjoyed this and was trying throughout to second-guess what sort of vermin it was; I didn't guess.Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-61570927999204319782010-04-30T21:22:58.757-04:002010-04-30T21:22:58.757-04:00Nice! It seemed like such a normal rodent story un...Nice! It seemed like such a normal rodent story until the end. So, salt, eh? :-) Enjoyed this one!shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-34114670666916037922010-04-30T15:00:04.239-04:002010-04-30T15:00:04.239-04:00Eek - was spooked enough by the idea of mice...!!
...Eek - was spooked enough by the idea of mice...!!<br /><br />Brilliantly told, and not a hint of how it was going to turn out till the very end - terrific.<br /><br />Just one tiny point I may have misunderstood - after "Marie gave Kitty a grateful smile and led her to to the cramped kitchen", should it not be Kitty rather than Marie who's only seen it a few times before?<br /><br />Maybe not, of course - in Marie's position, I don't think I'd be going in there too much, either!!<br /><br />Great story - thoroughly enjoyed it. :-)Aislinn O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10016307238982902244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-86851076123907405462010-04-30T14:42:01.606-04:002010-04-30T14:42:01.606-04:00"'You got a mouse problem?' said Kitt..."'You got a mouse problem?' said Kitty." Very funny.<br /><br />Those pesky demons.<br /><br />This was a lot of fun, and I liked the dialogue. Loved the description of the demon, too.<br /><br />Imaginative and fun to read. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-17792892745274908832010-04-30T14:23:48.679-04:002010-04-30T14:23:48.679-04:00Wow, did not expect that twist, ha!
You had me so...Wow, did not expect that twist, ha!<br /><br />You had me so intrigued, trying to figure out what the vermin could be. :)<br /><br />Hope he didn't have family living there.<br /><br />Nicely done!Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.com