tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post4915194283933283527..comments2024-01-10T03:21:40.829-05:00Comments on Attack of the Muses!!: FoolproofMonica Marierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03112762564137354581noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-7169640020478364052010-05-14T21:22:06.203-04:002010-05-14T21:22:06.203-04:00Ha! I know very few phone numbers, too. Great plo...Ha! I know very few phone numbers, too. Great plot and descriptions, especially the ambiguity at the end as to who is really the crazy one.<br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-29067924144686948482010-05-14T19:29:14.349-04:002010-05-14T19:29:14.349-04:00"The vents were blasting full heat on him; ma..."The vents were blasting full heat on him; making the already 90º day even more miserable. His bare thighs were adhered to his leather seat, whose electric butt-warmer was stuck on “toast” for some reason."<br /><br />Oh, one of those days. Gremlins are as good an explanation as any for the confluence of crap technology can put you through, especially cellphone technology.<br /><br />My favorite part of this lies in the descriptions, like the one I quoted, and in "[Dan] blessed the powerful, if rather sour breeze that ruffled his damp clothes." Words that aren't used too often to make it seem cliche, describing things that have sensory implications and immediately draw me into the feeling of the situation, with a little humor and humility on the side. It works to great effect.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-14406382670995422812010-05-14T16:33:28.005-04:002010-05-14T16:33:28.005-04:00Good gravy, he went nutso fast. I guess that's...Good gravy, he went nutso fast. I guess that's what comes of being dependent on technology. Tim's probably a perfectly nice guy. :-PValeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14148970927473800732noreply@blogger.com