tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post696774897229154079..comments2024-01-10T03:21:40.829-05:00Comments on Attack of the Muses!!: Morning PeopleMonica Marierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03112762564137354581noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-40465342860682870392011-07-23T02:01:46.988-04:002011-07-23T02:01:46.988-04:00I am a morning person *smiles cheerily* but I can ...I am a morning person *smiles cheerily* but I can so see this scenario IRL.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-7400043993707120502011-07-19T17:19:17.611-04:002011-07-19T17:19:17.611-04:00It's funny and horrible all at onceIt's funny and horrible all at onceRaven Corinn Carlukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06014248975870886289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-28618463962392032492011-07-15T21:45:17.788-04:002011-07-15T21:45:17.788-04:00Ouch! You've been peeking in windows and liste...Ouch! You've been peeking in windows and listening through keyholes! I couldn't read fast enough, it was so engrossing- and totally "real". You have the gift of dialogue, for sure. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-32917531520149929102011-07-15T20:34:12.949-04:002011-07-15T20:34:12.949-04:00@FARF Pleasure as always. (This wasn't at all ...@FARF Pleasure as always. (This wasn't at all based on reality though *cough cough*<br /><br />@Forego Nuts! I thought I got them all. This was an earlier piece so it was rife with errors like that. I better give it another looko'er.Monica Marierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03112762564137354581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-56542193117538123472011-07-15T20:18:06.467-04:002011-07-15T20:18:06.467-04:00Oh that made me laugh, especially the ending! Your...Oh that made me laugh, especially the ending! Your characterisation was brilliant. I'd watch your tenses, you were slipping from past to present tense and back again, but aside from that I really enjoyed this :D.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5294983244587919442.post-46878164977674523862011-07-15T17:24:44.441-04:002011-07-15T17:24:44.441-04:00All I can say is… yup, I can see this! Hit a littl...All I can say is… yup, I can see this! Hit a little TOO close to home, but that's OK. Great depiction… from someone who's sometimes up early with the kids himself & never could get the wife to make me a sandwich while I stood outside with the kids waiting for the bus.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.com